Paradoxically, thorough perusal of the evidence reveals that the arguement is fraught with unsubstantiated assumptions, which render the conclusion is untenable at best.

• ) and promotion to Professor Thomas； who comtributes a lot（不能这么说，这正是作者的假设，也是要批的地方，引用文中的信息要客观，这里建议说‘没有这些就她就会离开学校’做定语从句） to the Elm City University.